Please rate my rendering

Dear Fellow Members,

Hope you all are doing well.

I have just completed one USA project 3d interior and I would like to hear your feedback for the same.

It looks good, though I’m not quite sure what feedback you’re looking for…?

The fruit tree on the left could perhaps use a little more reflection, that’s about it.

Fresh looking room. To avoid the almost questionable horizon, move the camera one or two steps to the right, and capture the same parts.

Overall it’s good. Some things to consider…

  • Lighting feels a tad bit blown out and could use for some more attenuation or volumetrics if you will.
  • Wooden floor feels to “fake” needs some inconsistencies here and there. Like it feels too CGI, same with the vertical wooden slats.
  • There’s a bit too much empty space at the top where as the bottom feels like it’s occupied.

For some context these were done by an artist that uses Modo, Tomáš Sciskala. It isn’t as much about what software is used as much as it is about composition, materials, object placement, and of course lighting and camera.
Room 2.jpg
Room 1.jpg

I don’t think he was looking for feedback as much as advertising his services.

Nice work!